At last! The final draft of scene one! How exciting.
Today, take your rough draft from yesterday with all the suggestions you and your Responsive Reader have made and rewrite it using all the new information you now have. Need more expanded details? Stick 'em in there. Did your reader get confused? Explain what you meant. Did you do a bit of extra research to answer a reader's question? Slip that in. Maybe you realized you need to move some paragraphs around to make better sense.
That's it! That's all there is to it!
Well, not really. The truth is, you are going to come back to this bit of your book and all the others over and over as you learn more and get a better sense of where your book needs to go and what it needs to do.
But for now, you can set this first bit of your final draft aside, pat yourself on the back and start all over again with Lesson One.
This time, to get ideas for your free write, you may go back to your original list of ideas or scenes for your book, or you might want to sit down with part one and make out a list of questions or ideas that arise out of that first section.
Pick the most interesting of those ideas and go back to Monday's lesson: The Free Write.
There's more to writing a book than just free-writing and expanded details. In my next post, I'll talk about choosing and understanding your audience.
Thursday, March 15, 2012
Constructive Criticism
Okay, aspiring writers, you've all written your rough drafts. Is your rough draft a perfect, shining gem of the English Language? Gosh I hope so, but more likely, it has some flaws. Probably, you can already see some of those flaws and are itching to fix them. Good for you!
On the other hand, it's not easy to be totally objective about your own writing. You think you have said exactly what you meant. Your examples seem persuasive to you, but you don't yet see your work as others will see it.
So you've got to find somebody to read your rough draft and give you a "Reader Response" which is pretty much exactly what it sounds like. Somebody reads your rough draft and tells you what he or she thinks in as much detail as possible.
In order for this to work, you need to find someone who will tell you the truth. A reader who says, "It's perfect, don't change a word!" is wonderful for your ego, but he or she is no use to you as a writer. Look for somebody who can say, "Wow, I'm impressed by how hard you worked."
On the other hand, there's no point in choosing a reader who will tell you to give up; your writing is terrible; you will never write a book. If he or she can't suggest how you could make your rough draft better, then he or she probably isn't any better at writing than you are.
This is where we get into Constructive Criticism.
Constructive Criticism is about helping a writer to CONSTRUCT a better book.
Let's say someone asked you to offer constructive criticism on a piece of writing. How do you help that person improve her work?
Well, first you read carefully all the way through the piece.
Then you read through it again. This time, you underline, circle or highlight everything that catches your attention either good or...well...not quite so good.
Every time you note something you think works well, put a check-mark (or a smiley face or a plus-sign or a star) by that line and make a note of why you think it works or what you like about it.
Whenever you come across something that doesn't make sense or isn't clear or you're not sure if the author's point is correct etc., make a check mark (or a minus sign or a frowny face or cross it out with a fat red pen) and explain why it didn't work for you.
It is important when noting problems that you don't use emotional words like stupid, careless, bad, etc. Use "I" statements. "I didn't understand this." "I'm confused by this." "I wondered if this was true. Do you have support for this statement?"
You can find critical readers in writing groups, workshops and classrooms. You tend to get more thoughtful readers there because they aren't so afraid of hurting your feelings. Family members can help as long as you make sure they understand what you need. You might find a friend or a co-worker who is interested in the topic of your book and enjoys helping out a "real writer." Or another writer who has time to give you feedback in exchange for your opinion on his own writing.
If you don't have a critical reader yet, no need to panic. Set your rough draft aside overnight and come back to it in the morning. Or even set it aside for a week and get to work on the next section of your book. When you come back to it, you will see it more objectively. Then read your own work as a critical reader and make the same kind of notes you would if it had been written by someone else.
Once you've made your editing notes, you'll be ready to write the final draft of this tiny piece of your book.
On the other hand, it's not easy to be totally objective about your own writing. You think you have said exactly what you meant. Your examples seem persuasive to you, but you don't yet see your work as others will see it.
So you've got to find somebody to read your rough draft and give you a "Reader Response" which is pretty much exactly what it sounds like. Somebody reads your rough draft and tells you what he or she thinks in as much detail as possible.
In order for this to work, you need to find someone who will tell you the truth. A reader who says, "It's perfect, don't change a word!" is wonderful for your ego, but he or she is no use to you as a writer. Look for somebody who can say, "Wow, I'm impressed by how hard you worked."
On the other hand, there's no point in choosing a reader who will tell you to give up; your writing is terrible; you will never write a book. If he or she can't suggest how you could make your rough draft better, then he or she probably isn't any better at writing than you are.
This is where we get into Constructive Criticism.
Constructive Criticism is about helping a writer to CONSTRUCT a better book.
Let's say someone asked you to offer constructive criticism on a piece of writing. How do you help that person improve her work?
Well, first you read carefully all the way through the piece.
Then you read through it again. This time, you underline, circle or highlight everything that catches your attention either good or...well...not quite so good.
Every time you note something you think works well, put a check-mark (or a smiley face or a plus-sign or a star) by that line and make a note of why you think it works or what you like about it.
Whenever you come across something that doesn't make sense or isn't clear or you're not sure if the author's point is correct etc., make a check mark (or a minus sign or a frowny face or cross it out with a fat red pen) and explain why it didn't work for you.
It is important when noting problems that you don't use emotional words like stupid, careless, bad, etc. Use "I" statements. "I didn't understand this." "I'm confused by this." "I wondered if this was true. Do you have support for this statement?"
You can find critical readers in writing groups, workshops and classrooms. You tend to get more thoughtful readers there because they aren't so afraid of hurting your feelings. Family members can help as long as you make sure they understand what you need. You might find a friend or a co-worker who is interested in the topic of your book and enjoys helping out a "real writer." Or another writer who has time to give you feedback in exchange for your opinion on his own writing.
If you don't have a critical reader yet, no need to panic. Set your rough draft aside overnight and come back to it in the morning. Or even set it aside for a week and get to work on the next section of your book. When you come back to it, you will see it more objectively. Then read your own work as a critical reader and make the same kind of notes you would if it had been written by someone else.
Once you've made your editing notes, you'll be ready to write the final draft of this tiny piece of your book.
First Draft
Whew! Sorry for my prolonged absence. I had the flu. My dog peed on my homework. The traffic was jammed on the information superhighway, I was pursued by saber-tooth tigers etc.
But I promised you a rough-draft, so here I am.
The rough draft is your very first attempt to throw together a scene or section of your book. It doesn't have to be perfect or even pretty. It's your first, vague outline of what that scene or section will look like.
The rough draft differs from a free-write in that in the rough draft, you will spend more time thinking and making decisions about what you are writing. You will stop and start, re-examine your details, think about what it is you want to say.
As you write, you will be trying to figure out how you will pack in all the information you have written in your journal. There just may not be room. What is the most important information to keep? If you're falling short of 500 words, can you add more expanded details? Do you have an anecdote that would support your point, or make your character more real?
Now start writing this little bitty piece of your book.
Make it at least 500 words long but it's probably best not to go beyond 750 yet. 500-750 words usually adds up to 3 or 4 double-spaced pages. This should take you an hour more or less, but don't worry if it's a lot more-or-less. Maybe you were extra-inspired, or it was hard to get the words rolling. You will get better with practice.
You get started. I'll go empty my dishwasher and come back when you're done.
(about an hour later)
Okay, fed my chickens, refreshed my coffee. Are you done writing yet? Wonderful.
You're not done for the day, though. (actually, that's up to you: If you're completely exhausted, go ahead and save this next bit until tomorrow).
Your next step is to get feedback. Because Feedback is important and I want to say several things about getting the best feedback possible, I'm going to start a new post on:
Constructive Criticism
But I promised you a rough-draft, so here I am.
The rough draft is your very first attempt to throw together a scene or section of your book. It doesn't have to be perfect or even pretty. It's your first, vague outline of what that scene or section will look like.
The rough draft differs from a free-write in that in the rough draft, you will spend more time thinking and making decisions about what you are writing. You will stop and start, re-examine your details, think about what it is you want to say.
As you write, you will be trying to figure out how you will pack in all the information you have written in your journal. There just may not be room. What is the most important information to keep? If you're falling short of 500 words, can you add more expanded details? Do you have an anecdote that would support your point, or make your character more real?
Now start writing this little bitty piece of your book.
Make it at least 500 words long but it's probably best not to go beyond 750 yet. 500-750 words usually adds up to 3 or 4 double-spaced pages. This should take you an hour more or less, but don't worry if it's a lot more-or-less. Maybe you were extra-inspired, or it was hard to get the words rolling. You will get better with practice.
You get started. I'll go empty my dishwasher and come back when you're done.
(about an hour later)
Okay, fed my chickens, refreshed my coffee. Are you done writing yet? Wonderful.
You're not done for the day, though. (actually, that's up to you: If you're completely exhausted, go ahead and save this next bit until tomorrow).
Your next step is to get feedback. Because Feedback is important and I want to say several things about getting the best feedback possible, I'm going to start a new post on:
Constructive Criticism
Sunday, March 11, 2012
Facts and Figures
Okey-dokey,today, we take a look at Facts and Figures (development and support).
Now, facts and figures will mean different things in fiction than in non-fiction, so bear with me.
In non-fiction, facts and figures are the objective details you can bring in from reputable sources to support your premise (the basic idea of your scene/chapter). So, say you are pointing out to your readers the value of hiring an accountant to do their taxes. You might want to tell your readers how many people each year use tax accountants instead doing their own taxes. Has that number increased or decreased over the last decade? More importantly, is there a difference between the two groups in the amount of taxes paid (or refunded)? How about audits? Which group is more likely to be audited? Which group, once audited, is more likely to be fined for under-payment?
Where would you go to get that information? The IRS? Maybe they have a web page that would give you that information. Publications written for the accounting community? Accountants like reading about their infinitely fascinating field. Professional organizations? An accountant of your acquaintance? (The accountant might also be a great resource for humorous accounting anecdotes you can put in a sidebar to amuse your readers). How about just mentioning your own background and training. If, say, you happen to be an accountant, you can tell the reader how many hours of continuing education you have to do each year to keep your license.
Now you have given your reader concrete examples to demonstrate how they would benefit from hiring a tax accountant. Just as important, you have given the reader reasons to believe that you know what you are talking about. You are a trustworthy person who has done research and taken care to make sure your facts are correct.
Your mission today is to take your first topic from way back on Monday and write down...oh, say three to five questions you think your readers might have about that idea. Are they going to wonder how many different kinds of widgets an engineer can design in a week? Will they wonder why the heck they should listen to you--a perfect stranger (that's one of the first questions any reader asks, by the way)? Now take, say, the three questions you think are most important, and write down some places you might go to find CONCRETE ANSWERS to those questions. Books, articles, studies, professional organizations etc.
And now, You guessed it! Find the answers to those questions!
Now, Fictioneers! You've either been bored off your gourds for the last few minutes, or you have intelligently skipped down to this section and left the non-fiction type persons to their own devices.
Your job here is different (Contrast!). Your story needs facts and figures, too. These facts fall generally into two categories. Real-world facts and fiction-world facts. Let's start with the real-world facts. Say your story is set in...oh...Seattle. Real-world Seattle as opposed, for example, to a small part of Seattle that I made up for the purposes of a horror novel.
You are going to need some concrete information about Seattle including size, neighborhoods, streets, population, population distribution in terms of race, locations of important buildings and institutions, what the space-needle looks like and where it is located etc.
This is much easier if you have visited the city with a good map and guidebook. You will definitely need to get the FEEL of the city, the smell of the city at night, the temperature, the sound. If your character is going to be hanging around in the underground parts of Old Seattle, you will need to get that experience as well. Take a tour. Find a map of the underground. Read non-fiction accounts of Seattle history and present-day features. Or just live nearby for thirty years and visit it a lot. (Also Google. You can get a LOT of this information on Google)
On the other hand, you don't need to demonstrate your OWN knowledge of the city. You have to demonstrate YOUR CHARACTER's knowledge of the city. When he walks through the Pike Place Market, does he rap his knuckles on the back of the big bronze pig for luck? (I was pretty sure it was bronze, but I double-checked with a quick Google). Does he take a minute to watch the fish-mongers tossing salmon and steelhead back and forth to each other?
Or say your hero is a tax accountant and amateur sleuth. You don't have to add footnotes to prove you have researched accounting. Your hero talks knowledgeably about how line twelve on Schedule E proves that the murderer was... Or, if he is a world-renowned tax accountant, the dangerous blonde walks through his front door and says she has come to him because he won the Nobel Prize for Accounting, and she is desperate to find out what happened to her late husband's estate.
There are, on occasion, "facts" that you can make up. Save yourself some tedious research by planting your story in a fictional town, country or planet.
(PS, it's only tedious if you aren't INTERESTED in, say, Seattle or Minneapolis or fly fishing or accounting or whatever details your audience needs for a sense of reality in the story, and why on Earth are you writing about something that doesn't interest you?).
However, the readers will still be asking questions: What does this town smell, feel, look like? What exactly is involved in the hero's career as a norb-herder or cross-dimensional shuttle pilot? What plants grow in her garden? What is that weird-lookin' animal that almost ate her foot? How did the hero get here? In short, they will be asking all the some questions they would ask about real-world Seattle, it's just that you get to make up many of the answers.
So, your assignment for today is to look at the first scene you have written. What questions will your reader be asking about the character's knowledge and background, the reality and concreteness of the setting, whether the action is plausible? List at least three, or even better, five. What do you need to know in order to provide those answers?
Tomorrow, The first draft!
Now, facts and figures will mean different things in fiction than in non-fiction, so bear with me.
In non-fiction, facts and figures are the objective details you can bring in from reputable sources to support your premise (the basic idea of your scene/chapter). So, say you are pointing out to your readers the value of hiring an accountant to do their taxes. You might want to tell your readers how many people each year use tax accountants instead doing their own taxes. Has that number increased or decreased over the last decade? More importantly, is there a difference between the two groups in the amount of taxes paid (or refunded)? How about audits? Which group is more likely to be audited? Which group, once audited, is more likely to be fined for under-payment?
Where would you go to get that information? The IRS? Maybe they have a web page that would give you that information. Publications written for the accounting community? Accountants like reading about their infinitely fascinating field. Professional organizations? An accountant of your acquaintance? (The accountant might also be a great resource for humorous accounting anecdotes you can put in a sidebar to amuse your readers). How about just mentioning your own background and training. If, say, you happen to be an accountant, you can tell the reader how many hours of continuing education you have to do each year to keep your license.
Now you have given your reader concrete examples to demonstrate how they would benefit from hiring a tax accountant. Just as important, you have given the reader reasons to believe that you know what you are talking about. You are a trustworthy person who has done research and taken care to make sure your facts are correct.
Your mission today is to take your first topic from way back on Monday and write down...oh, say three to five questions you think your readers might have about that idea. Are they going to wonder how many different kinds of widgets an engineer can design in a week? Will they wonder why the heck they should listen to you--a perfect stranger (that's one of the first questions any reader asks, by the way)? Now take, say, the three questions you think are most important, and write down some places you might go to find CONCRETE ANSWERS to those questions. Books, articles, studies, professional organizations etc.
And now, You guessed it! Find the answers to those questions!
Now, Fictioneers! You've either been bored off your gourds for the last few minutes, or you have intelligently skipped down to this section and left the non-fiction type persons to their own devices.
Your job here is different (Contrast!). Your story needs facts and figures, too. These facts fall generally into two categories. Real-world facts and fiction-world facts. Let's start with the real-world facts. Say your story is set in...oh...Seattle. Real-world Seattle as opposed, for example, to a small part of Seattle that I made up for the purposes of a horror novel.
You are going to need some concrete information about Seattle including size, neighborhoods, streets, population, population distribution in terms of race, locations of important buildings and institutions, what the space-needle looks like and where it is located etc.
This is much easier if you have visited the city with a good map and guidebook. You will definitely need to get the FEEL of the city, the smell of the city at night, the temperature, the sound. If your character is going to be hanging around in the underground parts of Old Seattle, you will need to get that experience as well. Take a tour. Find a map of the underground. Read non-fiction accounts of Seattle history and present-day features. Or just live nearby for thirty years and visit it a lot. (Also Google. You can get a LOT of this information on Google)
On the other hand, you don't need to demonstrate your OWN knowledge of the city. You have to demonstrate YOUR CHARACTER's knowledge of the city. When he walks through the Pike Place Market, does he rap his knuckles on the back of the big bronze pig for luck? (I was pretty sure it was bronze, but I double-checked with a quick Google). Does he take a minute to watch the fish-mongers tossing salmon and steelhead back and forth to each other?
Or say your hero is a tax accountant and amateur sleuth. You don't have to add footnotes to prove you have researched accounting. Your hero talks knowledgeably about how line twelve on Schedule E proves that the murderer was... Or, if he is a world-renowned tax accountant, the dangerous blonde walks through his front door and says she has come to him because he won the Nobel Prize for Accounting, and she is desperate to find out what happened to her late husband's estate.
There are, on occasion, "facts" that you can make up. Save yourself some tedious research by planting your story in a fictional town, country or planet.
(PS, it's only tedious if you aren't INTERESTED in, say, Seattle or Minneapolis or fly fishing or accounting or whatever details your audience needs for a sense of reality in the story, and why on Earth are you writing about something that doesn't interest you?).
However, the readers will still be asking questions: What does this town smell, feel, look like? What exactly is involved in the hero's career as a norb-herder or cross-dimensional shuttle pilot? What plants grow in her garden? What is that weird-lookin' animal that almost ate her foot? How did the hero get here? In short, they will be asking all the some questions they would ask about real-world Seattle, it's just that you get to make up many of the answers.
So, your assignment for today is to look at the first scene you have written. What questions will your reader be asking about the character's knowledge and background, the reality and concreteness of the setting, whether the action is plausible? List at least three, or even better, five. What do you need to know in order to provide those answers?
Tomorrow, The first draft!
Saturday, March 10, 2012
Day Three--Compare and Contrast
Okay, you've done a free-write on your topic. You've written some expanded details to give your readers a clear picture of your topic (or setting or character or what-have-you). Now you are going to do some "Development and Support" in the form of a Compare and Contrast exercise. Things are getting more complicated now.
Take out your free-write and your expanded details. Now, think about your topic. Did you write an expanded detail describing common misconceptions about accountants? Maybe you described a character for a story. Or a setting. Or an action performed by a character. Or an action performed by an engineer.
Here's the tricky bit. Pick something to compare/contrast to that scene/action/character etc. Hmm. What does that mean, doggone it? Well, if you described a character, pick another character from the same story to compare him to. Described the hero? Compare him to the villain. Or compare him to his sidekick. Or to a similar character in another story. It's all good.
Described an action performed by an engineer? Compare it to a similar but not identical action that might also be performed by an engineer.
Described a scene in your story? Compare it to another scene. Compare/contrast two settings that will appear in your story. Or compare engineering to manufacturing.
It's important that you compare/contrast two fairly similar objects. Your hero and your villain are both humans (probably. More or less). They are engaged in a confrontation over a shared goal. If your human hero is battling extra-dimensional tentacled alien god thingummies, trying to compare them is going to be meaningless in terms of your project (just to prove me wrong, one of you will go out and do it brilliantly).
In a non-fiction project, you might compare an accountant to a bookkeeper because they have similar jobs and often work together (but only if that fits into your topic, otherwise it's a waste of your time). Or compare the cliched image of the accountant to a real-life accountant of your acquaintance.
Now that you have decided on something to compare/contrast, it's time to start making lists. You will need a column for similarities (compare), and another for differences (contrast). It doesn't matter where you start. Sometimes it's easier to do one list at a time. Or you might go back and forth between them as the spirit moves you.
Let's say you start with the hero and the villain. Let's say they are both: tall, driven, in love with Penny Pretty, popular, influential in their community etc. See if you can come up with at least ten of these, but don't sweat it if you can't. Your hero and villain are opposed to one-another, so it would make sense that they are more different than similar.
Now list the ways in which they differ. Villain is narcissistic, hero is empathetic. Villain is funny, hero is serious. Hero is a confronter, villain is a manipulator.Hero is influential because everybody likes him, villain is influential because everybody is scared of him. As you start listing these, you will begin to see how hero and villain will interact in your story.
In non-fiction, The engineer and the manufacturer may work on the same project (compare) and have a similar love for creating and developing technology (compare). However, engineering might be a largely intellectual pursuit, while the manufacturer is largely physical (contrast). And by the way, everybody get off my case--what the heck do I know about engineering or mechanics? (and extra credit for anybody who can tell me what you would call the guy who builds the prototype of the thingummy the engineer designs?).
And by the way, if it's easier for you to do this exercise in a paragraph--even in a free-write--that's absolutely fine.
Can you see now how this exercise can both clarify your own ideas about what you want to say, and give your reader some benchmarks for understanding your topic (or characters or seeing the setting, action or what-have-you?)
You won't necessarily use the stuff you've written down in this exercise directly. Maybe it will come out later in the way your hero and villain behave (villain sets trap for hero, hero plows right through it) or in the kinds of things that happen in different settings (fistfight in the bar, love scene in the boudoir). Or you may realize you need a chapter in your book for the engineer and another one for the mechanical type guy. That's great! Gosh, you're halfway to an outline/plan for your book.
Next lesson: Facts and Figures
Take out your free-write and your expanded details. Now, think about your topic. Did you write an expanded detail describing common misconceptions about accountants? Maybe you described a character for a story. Or a setting. Or an action performed by a character. Or an action performed by an engineer.
Here's the tricky bit. Pick something to compare/contrast to that scene/action/character etc. Hmm. What does that mean, doggone it? Well, if you described a character, pick another character from the same story to compare him to. Described the hero? Compare him to the villain. Or compare him to his sidekick. Or to a similar character in another story. It's all good.
Described an action performed by an engineer? Compare it to a similar but not identical action that might also be performed by an engineer.
Described a scene in your story? Compare it to another scene. Compare/contrast two settings that will appear in your story. Or compare engineering to manufacturing.
It's important that you compare/contrast two fairly similar objects. Your hero and your villain are both humans (probably. More or less). They are engaged in a confrontation over a shared goal. If your human hero is battling extra-dimensional tentacled alien god thingummies, trying to compare them is going to be meaningless in terms of your project (just to prove me wrong, one of you will go out and do it brilliantly).
In a non-fiction project, you might compare an accountant to a bookkeeper because they have similar jobs and often work together (but only if that fits into your topic, otherwise it's a waste of your time). Or compare the cliched image of the accountant to a real-life accountant of your acquaintance.
Now that you have decided on something to compare/contrast, it's time to start making lists. You will need a column for similarities (compare), and another for differences (contrast). It doesn't matter where you start. Sometimes it's easier to do one list at a time. Or you might go back and forth between them as the spirit moves you.
Let's say you start with the hero and the villain. Let's say they are both: tall, driven, in love with Penny Pretty, popular, influential in their community etc. See if you can come up with at least ten of these, but don't sweat it if you can't. Your hero and villain are opposed to one-another, so it would make sense that they are more different than similar.
Now list the ways in which they differ. Villain is narcissistic, hero is empathetic. Villain is funny, hero is serious. Hero is a confronter, villain is a manipulator.Hero is influential because everybody likes him, villain is influential because everybody is scared of him. As you start listing these, you will begin to see how hero and villain will interact in your story.
In non-fiction, The engineer and the manufacturer may work on the same project (compare) and have a similar love for creating and developing technology (compare). However, engineering might be a largely intellectual pursuit, while the manufacturer is largely physical (contrast). And by the way, everybody get off my case--what the heck do I know about engineering or mechanics? (and extra credit for anybody who can tell me what you would call the guy who builds the prototype of the thingummy the engineer designs?).
And by the way, if it's easier for you to do this exercise in a paragraph--even in a free-write--that's absolutely fine.
Can you see now how this exercise can both clarify your own ideas about what you want to say, and give your reader some benchmarks for understanding your topic (or characters or seeing the setting, action or what-have-you?)
You won't necessarily use the stuff you've written down in this exercise directly. Maybe it will come out later in the way your hero and villain behave (villain sets trap for hero, hero plows right through it) or in the kinds of things that happen in different settings (fistfight in the bar, love scene in the boudoir). Or you may realize you need a chapter in your book for the engineer and another one for the mechanical type guy. That's great! Gosh, you're halfway to an outline/plan for your book.
Next lesson: Facts and Figures
Friday, March 9, 2012
Day Two--the Expanded Details
Okay class, if you did your homework yesterday--and if you didn't, how dare you come to my class unprepared :P --if you did your homework, you now have a free-write to work from.
Today's assignment is to go through your free-write and pick out three details: The sky was blue, her lipstick was red, Engineering is hard, accounting is fun etc.
Now, take one of those details and practice creating what we in the trade call "expanded details" ie. Whispy horsetail clouds streaked a baby-blue sky filled with the white glare of a sun so bright it seemed to be more a white-hot explosion than a disk.
Or, People imagine accountants as skinny little men with pocket-protectors and ink-stained fingers hunching over battered desks with green-shaded table lamps illuminating pinched features and coke-bottle glasses necessitated by years spent squinting over faded receipts and forms with microscopic print.
Yes, the examples above are so elaborate as to be a little silly. That's okay. This is just an exercise.
The goal of this exercise is to learn how to give the reader details (obviously, ha ha). Early writers often don't realize how much detail a reader needs to get a clear picture of the scene or idea the writer is trying to convey.
Now do the same exercise with the remaining two details.
Gold sticky-star! Or if you're not completely exhausted, see how many expanded details you can do. Take each of your expanded details above, take out one piece of that detail and expand on that! Or do another free-write on a new scene or subject.
Get inspired, everybody!
Tomorrow, Compare and contrast!
Today's assignment is to go through your free-write and pick out three details: The sky was blue, her lipstick was red, Engineering is hard, accounting is fun etc.
Now, take one of those details and practice creating what we in the trade call "expanded details" ie. Whispy horsetail clouds streaked a baby-blue sky filled with the white glare of a sun so bright it seemed to be more a white-hot explosion than a disk.
Or, People imagine accountants as skinny little men with pocket-protectors and ink-stained fingers hunching over battered desks with green-shaded table lamps illuminating pinched features and coke-bottle glasses necessitated by years spent squinting over faded receipts and forms with microscopic print.
Yes, the examples above are so elaborate as to be a little silly. That's okay. This is just an exercise.
The goal of this exercise is to learn how to give the reader details (obviously, ha ha). Early writers often don't realize how much detail a reader needs to get a clear picture of the scene or idea the writer is trying to convey.
Now do the same exercise with the remaining two details.
Gold sticky-star! Or if you're not completely exhausted, see how many expanded details you can do. Take each of your expanded details above, take out one piece of that detail and expand on that! Or do another free-write on a new scene or subject.
Get inspired, everybody!
Tomorrow, Compare and contrast!
First Things First
Recently, someone cried out into the vast spaces of the internet, "Can't somebody offer me some writing exercises for aspiring writers?"
Like Superman, my super-ears tingled to the clarion (not to be confused with the Science-Fiction writing seminar with a similar name) cry. Actually, my usual alter-ego for this kind of thing is MONUMENTA, FEMINARCH OF THE MULTIVERSE!, but she is not likely to be helpful in this case, as her preferred solution to any problem is to blast it with a thunderbolt, and I am sure you will agree that would be overkill under the circumstances.
So, relying on my experience teaching Fundamentals of Writing--which I did for two years at Eastern Washington University--I am going to offer a few suggestions to beginning writers who want to write--book, novel, nonfiction etc.--but feel they need some basic skills. Remember, this is for the raw recruits. Old campaigners need not apply (except to make helpful suggestions in the comments section if you wish).
I am going to suggest a notebook (groans from audience). WAIT! Don't click your back button yet! This notebook is going to be the first draft of your book! See? You're writing already!
I'm going to assume you already have a topic, genre, or the vague outline of a story. I generally recommend a really detailed outline of your story, but that's a tome for another time.
Let's start bright and early Monday morning--or on your lunch break or at 11pm after the kids have finally gone to bed. You sit down with a cup of coffee (or a nice relaxing cocoa or chamomile tea). You flip open your notebook...er, I mean...open a new file in your "Writing" directory. In ten words or less, put down a title: a single scene/topic which you intend to include in your book, ie, Dangerous blonde walks into detective office, Hero rides into ghost town, aliens land in Wyoming, education necessary to become an astronaut, work hazards in an accounting office etc.
One scene only. If you have to include the word "and" then you are trying to write two scenes. No good.
If you haven't got that far in your planning yet, no problem. Write down, "Protagonist" or "Villain" or "Fantasy Adventure" Anything to do with the story, or the KIND of story, you would like to write.
(this works fine for short-storyists, too, but don't try to do it all at once. One itty-bitty scene a time, thank you very much!)
If you're a non-fictioneer, you might write down the general topic: Engineering, modern dance, writing a blog for new writers who want to write a book etc.
Now, for the next ten minutes, you are going to "free-write" without stopping. Your fingers will never stop rattling the keys or scratching that pen across the page. Ten FULL minutes. If your mind goes blank, write, Gosh darn it, my mind is a total freakin' blank, over and over for ten FULL minutes. If you never really get going, you can, go back and reset your timer for five minutes--or two. Anybody can write for two minutes at a time.
Whew! Not so bad, right? Ha ha, but you're not done for the day. No sir. Now, go through your free-write and highlight or circle three points, ideas or images that seem important or particularly interesting. Or one. If you can't find even one, no worries--you can try another free-write session on the same topic.
Now pick the best of those three ideas and...wait for it...You guessed it, ANOTHER ten-minute free-write on that idea!
Whew! There you go, you've done your assignment for the day. At this point, I like to reward myself with a shiny gold sticky-star on my calendar. It's surprising how gratifying it can be for a grown woman to admire that glittering little award and look forward to getting another one tomorrow.
PS. You can expect to do this every Monday for approximately the rest of your life.
Like Superman, my super-ears tingled to the clarion (not to be confused with the Science-Fiction writing seminar with a similar name) cry. Actually, my usual alter-ego for this kind of thing is MONUMENTA, FEMINARCH OF THE MULTIVERSE!, but she is not likely to be helpful in this case, as her preferred solution to any problem is to blast it with a thunderbolt, and I am sure you will agree that would be overkill under the circumstances.
So, relying on my experience teaching Fundamentals of Writing--which I did for two years at Eastern Washington University--I am going to offer a few suggestions to beginning writers who want to write--book, novel, nonfiction etc.--but feel they need some basic skills. Remember, this is for the raw recruits. Old campaigners need not apply (except to make helpful suggestions in the comments section if you wish).
I am going to suggest a notebook (groans from audience). WAIT! Don't click your back button yet! This notebook is going to be the first draft of your book! See? You're writing already!
I'm going to assume you already have a topic, genre, or the vague outline of a story. I generally recommend a really detailed outline of your story, but that's a tome for another time.
Let's start bright and early Monday morning--or on your lunch break or at 11pm after the kids have finally gone to bed. You sit down with a cup of coffee (or a nice relaxing cocoa or chamomile tea). You flip open your notebook...er, I mean...open a new file in your "Writing" directory. In ten words or less, put down a title: a single scene/topic which you intend to include in your book, ie, Dangerous blonde walks into detective office, Hero rides into ghost town, aliens land in Wyoming, education necessary to become an astronaut, work hazards in an accounting office etc.
One scene only. If you have to include the word "and" then you are trying to write two scenes. No good.
If you haven't got that far in your planning yet, no problem. Write down, "Protagonist" or "Villain" or "Fantasy Adventure" Anything to do with the story, or the KIND of story, you would like to write.
(this works fine for short-storyists, too, but don't try to do it all at once. One itty-bitty scene a time, thank you very much!)
If you're a non-fictioneer, you might write down the general topic: Engineering, modern dance, writing a blog for new writers who want to write a book etc.
Now, for the next ten minutes, you are going to "free-write" without stopping. Your fingers will never stop rattling the keys or scratching that pen across the page. Ten FULL minutes. If your mind goes blank, write, Gosh darn it, my mind is a total freakin' blank, over and over for ten FULL minutes. If you never really get going, you can, go back and reset your timer for five minutes--or two. Anybody can write for two minutes at a time.
Whew! Not so bad, right? Ha ha, but you're not done for the day. No sir. Now, go through your free-write and highlight or circle three points, ideas or images that seem important or particularly interesting. Or one. If you can't find even one, no worries--you can try another free-write session on the same topic.
Now pick the best of those three ideas and...wait for it...You guessed it, ANOTHER ten-minute free-write on that idea!
Whew! There you go, you've done your assignment for the day. At this point, I like to reward myself with a shiny gold sticky-star on my calendar. It's surprising how gratifying it can be for a grown woman to admire that glittering little award and look forward to getting another one tomorrow.
PS. You can expect to do this every Monday for approximately the rest of your life.
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